Open Poetry #33 |
Within your Song |
Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
you sing to me your soft tenor tones wrapped around words of desire that linger within my mind and shimmer through my soul as your hands stroke my skin and your breath teases my ear and I feel the depths of you bidding me to come fall within the keep of your passion to roam the halls of your heart where honor walks unhindered and truth burns like flame upon alter and I kneel in supplication that such tender devotion as I see cascading in veils of shear adoration shall enfold me always in the drape of your love s.a.t. Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And if he doesn't read this poem, take a copy....paste it smack dab in the middle of his shaving mirror... Beautiful work here. Yes indeedy, it is~!~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Absolutely gorgeous writing!! Bravo, Susan~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a tribute of love |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmmm, thank you friends. Warm hugs to all- Susan btw - hubby no like poetry, ah well, such is life. Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Beautiful. So far, everything I've read by you is wonderful, full of passion. Just beautiful. "Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Complete adoration written to perfection. Wonderful Susan. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very beautiful as always Susan. Very much enjoyed the read. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you all, my friends, for your warm replies and for taking the time to reply - I do so appreciate it. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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ShiningWindHaze Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 138California, United States |
I wonder if God will bless me with someone precious like you. - Haze |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Eric - thank you kindly Haze - I feel for your lonely heart and would that you will have someone dear find you that can heal your ache. Thank you for your kind reply. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Very sweet and very beautiful!!!! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
romantically appetizing...nice |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
It appears to me that you both sing the love song very well! Linda |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you my friends - warm hugs to you- Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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