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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2004-09-11 06:53 AM


Busy, bustling station alive
with sounds, announcements,
screeching wheels, in the
shadow of newly rising buildings.

Early autumn skies of blue,
alto cumulus stretching across,
above dirty grey clouds.
Cranes and towers obscure views.

Sitting alone, wrapped up
in thoughts, in musings.
Wild plants grow by the trackside,
blown there by the fresh breeze.

Diesel pervades the air, acrid
as people laugh and say hello/
goodbye to family and friends
going to all points on the compass.

The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved. Victor Hugo.

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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2004-09-11 07:01 AM


No need for photos..your vivid descriptions show me exactly the view...and if I had seen it with my own eyes..I may have missed some important little features.

Written like a book~

Love and hugs
~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


Goldenrose
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2 posted 2004-09-11 07:10 AM


Thank you my dear...for your words so kind..darkness is just around the corner in a shadow..

Goldenrose.xxx

The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved. Victor Hugo.

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-09-11 02:15 PM


what imagery!
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