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Open Poetry #33

My Darling

klm
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 58
New Orleans, Atlanta

0 posted 2004-09-10 08:30 PM

...until the last drop of my dying blood
vents from my final surging vein...
I WILL LOVE YOU.
...until the ending draws of my breath
fills the wings of my rising soul...
I WILL LOVE YOU.
...until my quivering words are murmurs...
my rose bud lips unfurl to die...
I WILL LOVE YOU.
...until my flute of reed does bloom again
and sends my dirge on its petals...
I WILL LOVE YOU.
...until the plumes of God's crystal angels
are fluffed by winds to fly me home...
I WILL LOVE YOU.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-09-10 11:09 PM

Very nice- romantic and passionate. Enjoyed.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2004-09-11 01:29 AM

Enjoyed...James

Kevo
Member

since 2004-06-02

Posts 466
Navarro County, Texas, USA

3 posted 2004-09-11 02:14 AM

What a divine vision of love you have. This was a very passionate, heartwarming, profession of love you have so eloquently written. I am pleased beyond words to see you here among these pages. Your talent is sure to be a great asset among us who hunger for the poet's written words.

Warm regards and welcome to you,

Kevin

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-09-11 05:15 AM

nice

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