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Fagin
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since 2004-05-07

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Ca

0 posted 2004-07-10 02:56 AM

Rain
Arrangement and Score
By Kelly Atwell and Robert Rilling

I’ve spent endless years.. searchin’ for dreams of my soul..
and in all that time, I’ve let a lot of cherished things go..

And many slip from the caverns of my mind..
But when I think of the ones of you, it makes me cry..

So I cry in the rain, see it wash away my pain..

I was told I am the product of the life I’ve led..
though you’re the only vision I’m seein’ my head..
And you’re every shining star, smilin’ down on me tonight,
and the choices that I’ve made, have let me down inside..

So I cry in the rain, see it wash away my pain..
See it wash it away..

You’re every shining star, smilin’ down on me tonight,
to know that you are happy, it’s no surprise,
to see that all this time was not in vain..
Though I cry in the rain, see it wash away my pain..

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-07-10 03:13 AM

I'd sure like to hear the music behind these words -- I take it these are lyrics -- if they're not, they sure are lyrical.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-07-10 08:03 AM

I was told I am the product of the life I’ve led..
though you’re the only vision I’m seein’ my head..
And you’re every shining star, smilin’ down on me tonight,
and the choices that I’ve made, have let me down inside..

~*~

Send me the music, bro...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2004-07-10 08:15 AM

Fagin,
Enjoyed the read.

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

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Oregon

4 posted 2004-07-10 09:37 AM

I agree with those who would enjoy hearing the music with these intriguing words. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Fagin
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since 2004-05-07

Posts 126
Ca

5 posted 2004-07-10 10:52 AM

Wow! Thanks all. I do have music for all these, and will make it available to all soon. Thanks so much

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2004-07-10 11:43 AM

Fagin~
Worded pictures set to music~
Excellent~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-07-10 12:25 PM

Wonderful!! I too would love to hear this to music!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2004-07-10 07:38 PM

Excellent verse...can't wait to hear the musical score.
TD

Juju
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In your dreams

9 posted 2004-07-10 09:33 PM

enjoyed

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2004-07-22 08:37 AM

I for one would love to hear this.
This is fantastic writing, talent runs deep in your family!

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

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Florida

11 posted 2004-07-22 09:16 AM

"I was told I am the product of the life I’ve led..
though you’re the only vision I’m seein’ my head.."

Very touching, moving write!

Enjoyed!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Sunshine

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12 posted 2004-08-13 02:23 PM

Sure hoping you're working on this one...

Martie

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13 posted 2004-08-13 02:27 PM

Fagin

A beautifully lyrical poem of heart music!

Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2004-08-13 02:28 PM

I am so pleased that this came back to the top, it is rather lovely!

Midnitesun

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Gaia

15 posted 2004-08-13 02:36 PM

I'd sure like to listen to this one

The One & Only
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since 2005-01-26

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16 posted 2005-02-01 01:59 PM

I just love that, You have been someone i always looked up to. love you,

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

17 posted 2006-02-05 09:04 PM

"I was told I am the product of the life I’ve led..
though you’re the only vision I’m seein’ my head..
And you’re every shining star, smilin’ down on me tonight,
and the choices that I’ve made, have let me down inside.."

Heart music Robert...heart music.
Play for the angels tonight..
and rest in our Lord's loving arms.

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural

18 posted 2007-10-27 05:42 PM

good write

ARCTIC WIND

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