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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-09-10 07:48 AM


Through passageways of forest trees
Silhouettes of long sun fingers leaning
Toward colors of atmospheric eyelids
Waking…
Like shift workers, hanging a seasonal calendar
Stillness furred around the edges, but
Focusing
As Night steps down cradling
White shirts of loud genesis light…
Signaling the beginning of another end

Land mirror expressions
Floating with open mouths of
Downward falling smiles
Great steeples spinning incantations
Right angle glue pots heating
Patches of discoloring leaves swaying
Making ready to scatter
Cooling gardens

Feathery lines, slightly yellow
Time of autumn canvas
Soon bare arm trees glint a
Horizontal premise with one more year
Waving good-bye to warm climate
Speaking of harvest song

Like a waking dream pouring toward
A gratified desire that waits…
Painting pictures, inside the mind of vineyards
With ornamental clarity of style
Nature’s bold trumpet of Indian Summer

© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-09-10 07:51 AM


I couldnt even pick a fav stanza LeeJ, this was beautiful! Just beautiful!  Good morning hugs to you.
Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2004-09-10 08:13 AM


the next page
of LeeJ's fall and winter
show me more ms...enjoyed

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2004-09-10 01:02 PM


not enough people read you, and that is their loss
wllz.on.ice
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since 2004-09-07
Posts 35
the united kingdom.
4 posted 2004-09-10 01:12 PM


sexy

a very warm poem.

loved it!

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