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Internal Seeking
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Internal Seeking |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Reality to percept Like a mirroring theater Haunting mind’s ambition Celebrates expansion Symbolic forms, spiraling heart Dramatizes detailed promises Oh again I go to the sea Where humans appear Taking origin in breezy sand To monitor Intrinsic individualism Flowing blends of changing shapes Which firmness animates Rich with entrepreneurship Nevertheless, noticeable The inlet opens to things Kinetics imitating character In its brevity comes the bayberry In the midst of flow Allowing eddies Yielding Drifting in celebration Affirmation of drift Which turns and looks at me Merging reformulation Verbal motion Of wide forces at work Following a wavering shore Extended wings float exhilaration Emphasis is on it’s way In a balanced art Intertwined fascinations Everywhere Speaking loose peripheries Pouring life into them Holding together suspension Where I wheel above the surf Can you hear it, this irregular verse? Offering an unbroken horizon Inviting eyes under clouds In varying lengths and curves Evoking exercise of soul I jog along the waters edge Trimming off into hues Soft sight flows with points of view Into the curvy flux of nature In hopes to sustain Collecting swerves, beyond any account Despite the lure of overall resolution Freedom cohabits with nature’s course Never to be the same tomorrow Easy going thoughts, places it's hand in mine |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sometimes just the stuff on the bottom of the shoe is our only direction showing us where we have been depthy stuff ms lee. enjoyed your neckline here |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I jog along the waters edge Trimming off into hues Soft sight flows with points of view Into the curvy flux of nature In hopes to sustain Collecting swerves, beyond any account Despite the lure of overall resolution Freedom cohabits with nature’s course Never to be the same tomorrow Easy going thoughts, places it's hand in mine YES! exactly Lee. This IS perfect. |
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Daniel Storm Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 91New York |
This has a gfreat flow of message and gives me the feeling of journeying, which I really like. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I feel the sand between my toes and the comfort of the kiss of sky and sea - lovely.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I am going to the beach today, just because of this write |
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