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Skyscape Doorway.
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Skyscape Doorway. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Pale cream orange particles of climbing clouds, swam in liquid aquamarine, the fire of the sun dimmed like embers cooling. Silhouettes of buildings, dark shaded against the ever deepening spectrum of indigo, cobalt and finaly midnight blue. Night, bringer of silence, of dreams, of darkness unsurpassed. Slowly it impacts on the person, fatigueing body, dulling senses dormant. Slip gently into the fantastic. Fade into the fairground, it's smell of sweet candy floss and onions, sound of screaming from rides. Fade out to a city street, hot, humid, full sunshine. Bronzed people walk in slow motion, pidgeons burst in frames. Fade into a cool mountain loch, echoing resonance of divers. Pure liquid sound of wind blown water, a dark sheet of mystery. Fade out to a lone island, smothered with identical white seabirds, calling, screaming, hovering, diving, into sea's of sun reflected dazzle. Wake, welcome the day's reality, prepare to enter again the third dimension of repose, the world of immaculate possibilities. The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved. Victor Hugo. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Phil, this was beautiful and cascaded down the page perfectly. Very well done sir! Well done indeed!  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
every single line of this was a fantastic journey...thank you for this wonder! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
This is a delightful spin around mind and world! Your imagery and description just melted within me, causing me to be there. I didn't think I wanted to go back to reality until I read your last verse. Wow! What an exciting extension! "Wake, welcome the day's reality, prepare to enter again the third dimension of repose, the world of immaculate possibilities" miscellanea |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Another time, another diminsion...time travel, dreams...and then awake to reality. Your brilliant mind never fails to surprise me....in more ways than one. Love ~ARH |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sounds like a great place |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Gentle Spirit...thank you so much for your very kind reply, i aim to please, so i am gald you liked it.... Goldenrose. The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved. Victor Hugo. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Lee...very pleased you enjoyed my journey, your words are such a great honour for me, coming from you....thank you.. Goldenrose. The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved. Victor Hugo. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Misc...so glad you could join us and be there with us, your words inspire me..and that is why we write is it not?..Thank you... Goldenrose The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved. Victor Hugo. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
ARH...time travel is something i like to do in my mind, often things prevent us, stand inour way, but with our mind we are free to travel anywhere..thank you.. Goldenrose.xxx The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved. Victor Hugo. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Dixie...come join us..come with us..you know where to find us..in our dreams..thank you.. Goldenrose. The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved. Victor Hugo. |
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