Open Poetry #33 |
Settling |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I tried, with eyes closed and mind settled and yet something inside me kept waking up until it no longer mattered that sleep wouldn't overcome it all and here I am... I awoke with the taste of those thoughts choking me and a light in the distance drawing me past the midnight hour to seek out the passion in your hearts. And as I bury myself in words, the resistance slows and the weavers of the night work their magic to return me to dream, once more. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
M, That explains why you are up so late. Sweet dreams dear friend, you deserve them. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
It's always good to dream and sleep isn't always a pre-requisite. Sometimes, I guess, it's also good to stop dreaming but I'll let you know when I'm sure about that. Take care! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
relating here |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
these are amazing lines Maureen: I awoke with the taste of those thoughts choking me and a light in the distance drawing me past the midnight hour |
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E S West Member
since 2004-08-31
Posts 116California |
Very nicely stated... hope you are doing well.... E S West "always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.." |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Beautifully written, Maureen, such nice thoughts... ~tier |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thanks everyone...just a sleepless night (but I bought some new pillows...hoping that solves most of the problem~~) M |
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