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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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0 posted 2004-09-09 10:51 PM



Your mysteries pace in a limitless sky
Call by name my secrets
The illusion of me became first light
Rising to pinnacle crests against the glow
Falling shadows to the wasteland of only

All churn is motionless
Gliding the updrafts of positive thoughts
To pause upon compromise
Opening in white organza drape
Shedding all constriction, clinging contradiction

Just here, beneath the hand of God
Two entities encompass a remarkable plea
A journey drawn to be
Echoes in the passing of forgotten
To soar in endless, aching us

Copyright Kkh 9/9/04

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
1 posted 2004-09-09 11:35 PM





how grand you paint the picture of what many do overlook and never see in your amazing words.

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-09-10 03:24 AM


what an ending
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2004-09-10 12:05 PM


Just here, beneath the hand of God
Two entities encompass a remarkable plea
A journey drawn to be
Echoes in the passing of forgotten
To soar in endless, aching us

Kathleen, this is so very beautiful!!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2004-09-10 12:29 PM


ThisDiamond
A lovely write, enjoyed.

Magnus
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5 posted 2004-09-11 02:40 PM


May spirits always fly and soar the winds of
time and change...as hearts beat ever strong
into the eve..

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
6 posted 2004-09-11 10:49 PM


Your words, as always, weave a beautiful blend of lovliness and thought.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
7 posted 2004-09-11 11:49 PM


Gliding the updrafts of positive thoughts
To pause upon compromise
Opening in white organza drape
Shedding all constriction, clinging contradiction

Kathleen, you paint the prettiest pictures
with such honest to goodness truth and wisdom.

As always~

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
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since 2003-07-16
Posts 248

8 posted 2004-09-11 11:52 PM


absolutely breathtaking...

i loved it..

__Love always___

   Ker

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
9 posted 2004-09-12 12:03 PM


TD,
   Incredible writing, layers upon to think and rest!  My favorite of your to date, I think.  There are so many to choose from!

                      cathy/miscellanea

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

10 posted 2004-09-12 04:12 PM


Perfect.

Eric

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