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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2004-09-09 07:53 PM

Silence

I spun this out of black and silver

to shape some color of gray

my fingers have the need of touch

he understands the connection

I prefer his laugh
in fragments of day for he

captivates me

like rain disappearing
into the blue of dusk
beauty of images
rich shades of darkness

I try but often fail
to catch the sound of their shapes
on my tongue --

echo too faint
over each like

slow change of color
in Septembers light

absorbing fibers
of each hand  beyond
the shadows defined in
traces   of   air

breathing in

{that his words
have stirred this heart}

I place you there

beauty filling eyes to

seep the ashes of warmth

as if you were never alone

while the sky stirs blue
~

I pray for sleep
that I may awake again
to gentle eyes

so winter will not need a reason

to stand alone
~~**~~

{Greatly Inspired and Muse Dedicated}

I don’t want the world to see me
cause I don’t think that they’d understand
When everything’s made to be broken I just want you to know who I am

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2004-09-09 08:05 PM

Stay inspired, for you write some of your
finest when you are. Well done Lauren.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-09-09 08:08 PM

"I pray for sleep
that I may awake again
to gentle eyes

so winter will not need a reason

to stand alone"
~~**~~

Awesome beautiful lady...
IWIHWT!!!
Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-09-10 02:22 AM

what an ending! yes!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2004-09-10 08:53 AM

ah... beauty as always in your woven words...

truly a pleasure to read you ma'am.. truly

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2004-09-10 09:00 AM

awww hon, this is lovely! What a beautiful inspire!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2004-09-10 03:42 PM

God this made my chest ache:

I pray for sleep
that I may awake again
to gentle eyes

beautiful!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2004-09-12 12:27 PM

slow change of color
in Septembers light

absorbing fibers
of each hand  beyond
the shadows defined in
traces   of   air

breathing in

Your words breathe life, like the softest breeze that goes unnoticed,
easing this weary heart of mine.

Hugs, Lauren~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2004-09-12 01:02 AM

Lovely...James

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

9 posted 2004-09-12 01:44 AM

"I prefer his laugh
in fragments of day for he

captivates me"

I love when that happens.

And you, lovely lady, stirred up something wistful inside with this...

lovely is love and looks fine on you m'friend, and reads so smooth, like chocolate moose going down.

I curtsey.

ShiningWindHaze
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 138
California, United States

10 posted 2004-09-12 03:14 AM

Much enjoyed.

- Haze

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

11 posted 2004-09-12 10:20 AM

i melted away after reading this L,
nice pic too ...
~jw

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

12 posted 2004-09-12 12:04 PM

Mmmmmm - sigh. Your words drape like satins and silk in their flowing beauty.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

13 posted 2004-09-12 12:06 PM

"I prefer his laugh
in fragments of day for he

captivates me

like rain disappearing
into the blue of dusk
beauty of images
rich shades of darkness

I try but often fail
to catch the sound of their shapes
on my tongue --

echo too faint
over each like

slow change of color
in Septembers light"

You paint the greatest images. Hiya Lauren...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

14 posted 2004-09-12 12:45 PM

So do I, dear, so do I.
A

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