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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2004-09-09 07:51 PM

overhead there are rainbows
endless skies forever
where I dance

with you, dance

you lift me up
carry me on wings
with your love I am weightless
with your love, I'm entranced

we're one with the sunset
content with stars
the moon gently chides us
for it is her night

clouds slowly move us
softly rains down us
sweet dewy kisses
from delirious heights

the sun rises on us
unabashedly exposes
what we lay bare
for all to see

overhead there are rainbows
endless skies forever
where I dance with you
and you dance with me...

~tier

© Copyright 2004 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved

Elan
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since 2002-05-03

Posts 382
State of Wide Eye

1 posted 2004-09-09 07:57 PM

Let me confess,
here and now...
your poem requires
a hanky alert.

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-09-09 08:06 PM

I hope you dont mind if I print this and put it only on my wall, no-one else's wall - just mine to read.

This is good.

Dave

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-09-09 08:10 PM

Simply beautiful Tier...beautiful!
Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-09-10 02:27 AM

very pretty

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2004-09-10 03:45 PM

Tier?

this is a melodic chant . . .

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

6 posted 2004-09-10 10:12 PM

Yes, rainbows, inverted arcs smiling and dancing among the stars... Very pretty!

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2004-09-14 12:11 PM

Enjoyed the dance, and all the sweeping colors in your rainbow~

rascalx
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since 1999-08-25

Posts 590
Florence, SC, USA

8 posted 2004-09-18 09:57 PM

Now that's what I call dancing!

I love this; I will be showing this one to my fiance'/dance partner

. Definitely one of the sweetest love poems I have read in the blue pages.

skyshine

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Beneath the northern stars

9 posted 2004-09-19 11:05 AM

How beautiful.....

~sky

So you go and make it happen
Do your best, just keep on laughing
It's all on you, there's always a brand new day. -Avril Lavigne

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

10 posted 2004-09-19 11:36 AM

lovely - just lovely.

susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

MGROVES

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california

11 posted 2004-09-22 06:02 AM

beautiful

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