Open Poetry #33 |
Not Now, No More |
time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
Long haired, dark eyed beauty she was. The object of love and desire. Years of grit and grind With absolute and total confusion of mind. So called female Adult of the species. So much and so full of baby making machinery, that to maintain a single logical coherent thought, longer than two minutes at a stretch without some Maternal instinct overriding all else, was a physical impossibility. Creator of frustration And mental castration, That was the way it was, But not now, no more. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I can understand in that I have met and known women I wish to have children with. I wouldn't put it as you have. Talent yes, inner self doesn't show through. Dave |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Hmmmmm, not sure how to take this - but it is thought provoking. Would like to know a little more, I guess - Smiling Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
DavePage, Thank you Dave for the comments. Not so much about wanting to have children, more on having had, and the maternal instinct dominating life for all to the point of not being able to have what might be referred to as a normal relationship in thought or deed. Susan, thank you for reading, perhaps the above will assist. |
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