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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-09-09 04:49 PM




lonely

dying fading stars
fall onto the blackened snow
night captures winter

©sdt'01

"Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless."
--Mother Teresa

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Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2004-09-09 04:50 PM


Yep, that sums it up perfectly!!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-09-09 04:54 PM


together

shining on some lonely planet

they captured hearts

Like it a lot

Dave

Dark Angel
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3 posted 2004-09-09 05:06 PM


I'm going to replace that "n" in lonely for a "v"....

Lovely.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Pilgrimage
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4 posted 2004-09-09 05:11 PM


fall flaming to my snowbank
quench your fire in frozen dreams

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Susan
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walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-09-09 05:33 PM


yes - perfection.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

klm
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6 posted 2004-09-09 11:59 PM


17 syllables weaved to perfection.
passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2004-09-10 02:15 AM


sad...but I love sad
JamesMichael
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8 posted 2004-09-10 07:07 PM


Very nice...James
froggy
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9 posted 2004-09-11 09:19 PM


Another good one.

:-)

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