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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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 lonely dying fading stars fall onto the blackened snow night captures winter ©sdt'01 "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Yep, that sums it up perfectly!! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
together shining on some lonely planet they captured hearts Like it a lot Dave |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I'm going to replace that "n" in lonely for a "v".... Lovely. Maree  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
fall flaming to my snowbank quench your fire in frozen dreams Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
yes - perfection. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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klm Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 58New Orleans, Atlanta |
17 syllables weaved to perfection. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad...but I love sad |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Another good one. :-) |
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