Open Poetry #33 |
No Thoughts of You (repost for my 10,000th) |
Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
. . . I hardly think of you anymore Unless I am rushing out the door And seasonal colours take me by surprise Like the first time that I saw your eyes. Thoughts of you no longer flood my days Except when my face feels the sun's rays Or it turns cloudy, rains or snows You made each day grand....I suppose. Memories now seldom haunt my nights Only when alone...I turn off the lights Then that vacant space beside me chills No longer filled with passion's heat and thrills. No, my mind's not rattled by your name Just when I cry and need someone to blame My life's too full for tea and sympathy Yet, I have wondered some - Does he think of me? ~*~*~*~*~*~ Chris Barker ~***~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Way to go CHRIS!! |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
wow! denial is such beautiful poetry! Rf |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Enjoyed this greatly, Chris. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Atta girl! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully written and expressed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou my friends. Ten thousand posts have just flown by! hugs! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
See I am getting smart, no way could this be "about you" for who in their right mind would never let a gem like you go? Congratulations Chris, you are truly an asset to these halls. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
very nice |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sharon - that is a sweet thing to say - thankyou! MGROVES - thankyou so much for your comments! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi sweet sister of mine! Just got in the door and I'm glad I didn't miss the party!! WHOOOOHOOOOO! 10,000 posts and going strong! Congrats on the milestone Chris. ~Love ya and I'm SO proud, Teed!~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
chris...from the start i have loved your poetry...you write of things i feel and just whisper to myself...i admire you as a woman and a writer...congrats baby you deserve it !!! helen |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Congrats on your 10,000th, and beautiful poem, Chris! ~sky So you go and make it happen |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Nancy Lee, Helen & sky - thankyou, thankyou, for supporting me and for all of your lovely comments on my writing attempts. Hugs! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful write for your 10,000th post Chris. Congratulations!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
*sigh* some men are fools, like the one that let you go. What a beautiful poignant write. Library material. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Our thoughts of lost loves are triggered by the oddest quirks of a sight or sound or smell. They reach down into us and twist those heart muscles all over again. Well done! Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Congratulations Chris...and a well done on the repost...I have been down that road before...Kinda like someone asking when was the last time they were thought of and we reply...now, tomorrow, yesterday, forever. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou .. all of you .. my poet friends. You all have been so kind to me. Hugs! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Chris, congrats on your milestone! wonderful write, I can relate |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Dixiedoolegirl - thankyou so much! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Chris, congradulations on our 10,000th post. This is a beautiful poem. I have wondered the same thing about my husband. It seems I am always thinking of him. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Chris, WAY TO GO! 10,000? I know with your talent you could have written 10,000 poems, but I figure you racked a few of these up by being so supportive to fellow Pipsters! I really appreciate sharing the Blue pages with you! CONGRATULATions, Chris! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Golly gee, you and your sis are on a roll!! Love these words of yours. Congratulations Chris, and Happy Days to you. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Enjoyed the read... *~coco~* |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
congrats and enjoyed I can fly like a penguin |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
CONGRATULATIONS CHRIS!!!! 10,000 is an unbelievable milestone. Hugs and Smiles, Marti |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Congratulations Chris, and you wrote a beauty to go with it.... |
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Mary Parry Junior Member
since 2004-10-12
Posts 45Felixstowe, England |
Oooh, that's nice. And so sad too. Mary |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Chris, I don't know how I missed this but am glad someone brought it back up. Beautiful and haunting... Congrats! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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