»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #33
»
invitation
| Open Poetry #33 |
|
invitation |
|
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
|
just a visitor she said when she checked in passing by to see what it is all about and if the view is worth the stay or is it as others that change with morning when the night leaves and takes the lover too and even the memories she sat down there by the window sea and sipped her wine she was not there at all in her thoughts until he came in and told the desk she was his special guest but she should have the key ___________ dark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (09-09-2004 10:11 AM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2004 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is deceptively simple, with quiet images. I like it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
||
|
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
there are great visions here to view, an island paradise, table for two... and told the desk she was his special guest but she should have the key so he is allowing her, quite patient for he has a 3rd eye, which knows enjoyed this, the invitation... soft eyes which perhaps views an endless ocean of peacefulness |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
||
|
Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sometimes its he that be the guest. and she that changes with the morn... and sometimes that is the way it has to be. Well done  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
||
Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 love seeing life through your eyes I don’t want the world to see me |
||
|
Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
If she is by the window sea, I'm sure that she has appreciation for all views. Enjoyed this, Sir. |
||
|
Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Enjoyed Mr Dark Maree. The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
