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Temporal Wanderings |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Could it perhaps be persuasion tight with shape Body coordination with eye traces Winding our path Bends and blends perpendicular Evoking differences to soft eyes Yielding to a path of significance An overall wandering of drawing minds This becoming inspiration Quite naughty, quite irrelevant Turns my quest where the waterlines Catch me…randomness flows system To the left, to the right Curves sound, shifting me like wet sand Yummy sums of coherent wholeness Feeding on metamorphosis I cannot resist change For the forms would be to costly I see slim waiters taking orders Willing escargot to fasten their shells Perceiving nothing for the new walk tomorrow I stumble to age, glasses correct a shortsighted world When there are always to sides of trademarks deepening Perhaps an allusion of passage Which we place into a field of action Swallowing the pulsations, membranes and shapes To me…regardless…you were of great form Chronologically arranged by a collection of poems Working in and out, coming and going Reflecting the eye of the poem Transcends plenitude, when one floats Nearest to a shapeless form Attributing the too large and remote Of oneself….blameless persuasion Working in and out of events, Inclusive to ones intellect Implying an overall merge Unity upon oneself, which is unity altogether Where meditations unfold Integrating a phenomenal walk Streams of thought rolling into shapes Temporal wanderings |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
weaving complication into pancake batter and licking your fingers leaving the lipstick energy here is expresso african roast, enjoyed it much ms |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
LJ You are so good you are hard work to read. It was more I fly with words and thoughts To avoid entrapment in words and thoughts I fly with myself as I fly with instinct, pleasure, my inner self To an inner self Dave |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write as always Lee! Saving this one in my special LeeJ folder.  Hugs YOU! ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
hmmm lots of thinking on this...I think I know what you mean And if I do, I like what I think I know this means |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you fly as always in your poetry |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
And for a moment, I too wandered along Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
LeeJ When I read some of your poems (like this one) with very little punctuation, I become almost breathless....I gasp in a little where the ... are, this adds to the impact of the content, thoughts (such as are displayed in this poems contents) should leave the reader a little breathless...like reading Ginsbergs "Howl" does... enjoyed ---------ice/ford ><> |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!!! Eric |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Willing escargot to fasten their shells Perceiving nothing for the new walk tomorrow I stumble to age, glasses correct a shortsighted world When there are always to sides of trademarks deepening Perhaps an allusion of passage Which we place into a field of action Swallowing the pulsations, membranes and shapes To me…regardless…you were of great form Chronologically arranged by a collection of poems The mind works in strange ways, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading yours. Nice going, LeeJ~ |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Offten these wanderings of our minds make us realize things which help us grow and change. Very nice write! Much love, Kristabell |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
LeeJ, Your closing line brought the whole together in one flow of emotion. Well done TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
amazing |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
 great stuff! and then He created the horse... |
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