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Broken Wings |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York 
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Open me up, and flip through my pages. Are you hooked? Are you ready for me to reel you in? Who am I, that I could walk away. From Destiny and Tranquility. Let them carry on, like there was nothing I could do. Read past the lines, Read between the lies. Read past what doesn't quite add up. Let me apologize, let me grow and learn, Let me run, let me walk, Help me find my wings to fly away this time. (fly away from the torrment of a broken heart) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
And if I try, Will you recognize my attempts? For flying has never been easy And seldom accomplished Without repeated effort. Gravity is undeniable And even less forgiving. To be both feared And respected. But face your fears and take the chances. Let me help you try again. This could be a long struggle, But you cannot soar Until you learn to fly. Peace... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Read past the lines, Read between the lies. Read past what doesn't quite add up. Let me apologize, let me grow and learn, Let me run, let me walk, Help me find my wings to fly away this time. ~*~ It is a sad poem, Kellie, when one writes that lies should be overlooked. Until one realizes their truths, and deals with them, one on one, one by one... flight will never come. Because when the truths are truly realized? There will be no reason to fly, at all. Contentment and peace of mind will reign over flight, anytime.  Sun |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Kellie, though self-healing must start from within, I believe it necessarily involves accepting that some wounds are meant to stay with us forever, to keep us from making the same mistakes over and over again. You will fly free only after you've accepted that you cannot escape yourself, at any altitude. Wishing you well, as always, and hoping you will soon find your clear pathway and move forward. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
may your spirits wings fly to the song of love your soul sings liked this sad but good  |
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