Open Poetry #33 |
Removing Blinders |
milkweed Junior Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 42fields of gold |
Guess who? Behind you, I hold my hands over your eyes. You guessed. No surprise. I suppose you heard me open the door. Or maybe you heard my shoes tiptoe 'cross the floor. Perhaps, you caught the scent of my perfume. Maybe, you heard me chuckle when I entered the room. Guess who Loves you more than words could say? You guessed. Twice right you are today. I suppose you heard my heartbeat out loud. Or maybe you heard my inner most voice spread it's happy smile. Perhaps, you caught the scent of pheromone. Maybe you felt my perspiration when we stood there all alone. When I thought I was sneaking up on you and asking you to guess who, You surprised me instead, by whispering what was in my head, You’d been hoping for a sign, So I’ll remove my hands now, and let you find, me. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Welcome to Passions! We are glad you have joined us.....Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Kindly~ Lauren~ I don’t want the world to see me |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a cute and fun-loving read! Welcome to Passions! I especially enjoyed the following line: "Or maybe you heard my inner most voice spread it's happy smile." Love & Light, Earth Angel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Got me thinking about my girlfriend and her perfume now...and I probably won't see her until Saturday...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write Welcome to Passions |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You have a gentle touch and an eye for detail -- things I value in poetry. So many good poets here, so little time! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
delightful, and then some...wonderful write! |
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Daniel Storm Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 91New York |
This is really sweet |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Welcome to Passions, milkweed. I think you're going to enjoy yourself in our little community. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to the Passions family Much enjoyed your first post ! Have fun here Chris |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a delightful write Welcome to Passions, I look forward to reading more from you. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Yes, delightful! Welcome to Passions. Hope you'll stay awhile. |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
This was an enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. quatro |
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