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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2004-09-08 08:39 PM



reflecting in pause

but not stuck in diapause

time captures thoughts

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-09-08 08:44 PM


Kacy,
I gave up "diapsuse" when I was two! I'd hate to be stuck there. But my '80s are coming.


If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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2 posted 2004-09-08 08:45 PM


immortal in thought

frozen in time

stilled in wonder

Dave


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3 posted 2004-09-08 08:49 PM


Larry!!! LOL
Dave, nice to see you here again. Thank you for that reply!

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4 posted 2004-09-08 09:46 PM


Doesn't it, though?

A pause, reflected.

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5 posted 2004-09-08 09:47 PM


thanks Sunshiney one
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6 posted 2004-09-09 05:50 AM


And you always convey thoughts beautifully ...
Love, Margherita

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7 posted 2004-09-09 07:07 AM


time captures thoughts....

keep your pen handy, jot em down......


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8 posted 2004-09-09 07:26 AM


a moment's reflection

and the ripples embrace

Hiya Kacy, good morning

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9 posted 2004-09-09 09:54 AM


endless reflections,
images ripple and fade,
i waited too long.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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10 posted 2004-09-09 10:52 AM


nice
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11 posted 2004-09-09 12:23 PM


nice
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12 posted 2004-09-09 04:52 PM


No longer pausing
Tempus really  fugits
Life's worries do too!

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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13 posted 2004-09-09 05:00 PM


LOL at that one, Ken. THANKS!
And to each of you who read and reply, thank you, for spending a moment here with me.
It is greatly appreciated.

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14 posted 2004-09-09 05:40 PM


Mmmm, pausing here to soak up your words

Susan

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15 posted 2004-09-09 05:58 PM


thank you so much for that reply, Susan
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