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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-09-08 05:05 PM


Cattail Candle


you are a marsh treat
appearing to float above
the darkness beneath me
shooting straight from earth
a tender waxen river candle
to touch in passions kindle
truly I melt in your desire
secure in your undoing
where you echo my fire


just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart



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1 posted 2004-09-08 05:07 PM


LOL.. you win...!!!!

I have to work as well as try to read and write to keep up with you...
I bow to my better....

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