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sim0riah
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

0 posted 2004-09-08 10:41 AM

Just a smell
of your freshly bathed hair
A gentle kiss against your neck
and a nibble on your ear

My hands
Rubbing you shoulders
puts a smile on your face
So loud that anyone can hear

Massaging and pampering you
Making the woman come alive in you
Like being in a dreamland
A place of desire

Holding and caressing you
Wanting to have a taste of you
as we lay together
Our emotions are burning with fire

As I kiss you deeply
and taste your every breath
It makes my heart revive
I know that now my love for you
has finally come alive

sim0riah

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-09-08 10:59 AM

beautifully written

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2004-09-08 11:15 AM

Very sweet Richard.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2004-09-08 11:36 AM

Yeppers! I'd say your love has come alive! Oh yes indeedy!

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2004-09-08 01:14 PM

WOW! what passion...and from just one smell..
reminds me of that windsong commerical..."I can't seem to forget you..your windsong stays on my mind".

Your words are alive...grabing me and pulling me in from the computer screen...Too bad we don't have smellavision....then I could put my perfume with my poem...hey maybe that is a new suggestion for PIP..LOL

Love and Hugs
~ARH

Ps...Do you have coupons for such an offer?
How much are they? The price?...LOL

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2004-09-08 01:20 PM

sim0riah
Well done my friend, enjoyed.

sim0riah
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

6 posted 2004-09-08 01:33 PM

Coupons?? All thats needed is a beautiful smile a trusting heart and wonderous imagination

sim0riah

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

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