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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2004-09-08 05:50 AM




(Photo by Me)


The morning mist rises,
as sun greets the day,
warm thoughts of you,
begin to blow my way,

Tiny little butterflies,
begin to dance and sway,
upon the gentle breeze,
your loves speaks to say,

My gentle spirit is here,
speaking silent whispers
to your heart,
Can you feel me, I am near,
as the soft breeze tickles,
your ear,
blowing upon every part,




Words of love I am sending,
my love swirls around you,
from toe to head, neverending,

upon the windchimes,
my lovesong plays,
precious love i am sending,
throughout all your days,

My love is fast and furious,
passionate like a twister,
but soft, warm and gentle,
spoken in silent whispers,




My love to you I send,
in letters I have written,
blowing upon whispers in the wind.

© Copyright 2004 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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1 posted 2004-09-08 06:33 AM


Very nice and gentle poem..thank you..

Goldenrose.

The supreme happiness in life is the conviction that we are loved. Victor Hugo.

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2004-09-08 07:11 AM


Glad you liked it....of course you enjoyed it better when recited to you with my voice...

Thank You~
Love ARH

sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
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3 posted 2004-09-08 09:39 AM


With your voice, that would be very sweet indeed..Although it is the sweetness of words that sometime go unheard...Makes the passion in ones heart, dream of such a smile, a voice is just a plus, to a mind so worthwhile

sim0riah

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2004-09-09 12:28 PM


Silky...James
Margot
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5 posted 2004-09-09 03:43 AM


Lovely

Margot

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

Pilgrimage
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6 posted 2004-09-09 10:01 AM


I had to read this one, when I saw the title.  It didn't disappoint me. Nicely done, and lovely images.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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7 posted 2004-09-09 10:12 AM


ARH, I loved the poem as well as the
title .
Hugs,
Ethel

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