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shakespeare New Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 5 |
Smile now not tomorrow Smile has great magic It can change your sorrow To romance from tragic Smile grabs hateful feeling And replaces with charming Fast to peace hurry up The day begins with get up My love full of shame The heart suffers of pain Expressing feelings is hard As playing of courage part Smile before the time end Then , remained without hope Glances of fond do send So, rain starts with drop |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Welcome to Passions shakespare....we are glad you're here! I hope you will enjoy your stay with us.....enjoyed this, and look forward to more....  Please check your email for a special greeting Kindly~ Greeneyes I don’t want the world to see me |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! I enjoyed your first post and look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Smile now not tomorrow Smile has great magic It can change your sorrow To romance from tragic" ~ Yes, indeed! The power of a smile! ~ and you just put one on my face! Warm welcoming hug, Earth Angel |
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shakespeare New Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 5 |
Thanx alot I really considered u as my family. &I want all of u read my writing with critical eyesas well as guide me. Best wishes all. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hello shakespeare. A pleasure to meet you and welcome to passions. I like your poem. The rhyme scheme is nice for the most part and reads well. The meter could use a little work...but overall it is well done. Bravo! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Welcome, shakespeare! What an inspirational first post. I hope to see more from you!  ~sky So you go and make it happen |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
shakespeare,  Welcome! Hope you truly enjoy it here. But the critical eyes and guidance won't happen unless you check the critique box. Peace.If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
This was a very inspirational write. Welcome to PIP. You are most welcome here. You'll find some of the most compassionate, supportive, and engaging people here that you'll ever meet. We are all here to support and encourage each other in writing, work, love, inspiration, etc. Whatever else comes to mind. Again, make yourself at home. You are most welcome here. As for your post I thoroughly enjoyed it. I will be on the look out for others to read as well. Your poetic friend, Kevin |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welcome! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, now that's a pretty bold pen name you've chosen! Welcome to Passions. I enjoyed your first offering, look forward to more. Remember, with a name like that, we do expect many, many fine offerings!  |
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milkweed Junior Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 42fields of gold |
Yes, smiles. I'm smiling now. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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