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Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

0 posted 2004-09-06 05:19 PM

restlessness in mouth
twists tongue like vines of ivy
makes for toothless talk

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

ShiningWindHaze
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 138
California, United States

1 posted 2004-09-06 05:53 PM

My tongue longs to twist now.

- Haze

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-09-06 05:58 PM

Your title fits well with this very
oriental feel, a sense of wakefulness...

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2004-09-06 07:17 PM

Maree:

this reminded me of dying
to say something but keeping
one's mouth shut

I adore your picture . . .

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2004-09-07 01:05 AM

This is very cool Maree!!

And your new picture is just darling!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-09-07 02:46 AM

kewl write!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 2004-09-08 01:26 AM

Thank you all, and Sue, I think this is more about trying to keep those dark suggestions to oneself.

Thanks again everyone

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2004-09-08 08:06 AM

(smiling)
well done ma'am... in its composition and choice of words..you create the imagery that conveys very well the message..

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2004-09-08 10:40 AM

Excellent and I LOOOOOOVE the new pic!!
Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2004-09-08 11:08 AM

supurb!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2004-09-08 01:47 PM

I greatly admire the ability to create such a vivid image... period. *S* To do so in so few words... excellent work! *S*

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

11 posted 2004-09-08 06:55 PM

gotcha Maree, thanks for the clarification

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

12 posted 2004-09-09 04:51 PM

and here i thought you had been spending quality time with the elderly at resthomes

J

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