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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-09-05 08:55 PM




© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-09-05 09:09 PM


Smiling here Karilea.

This is absolutely beautiful.

Mxx

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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2 posted 2004-09-05 09:13 PM


I agree, lovely, both the words and photo

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3 posted 2004-09-05 09:20 PM


Karilea,
Wonderful write & pic! Thanks.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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4 posted 2004-09-05 09:48 PM


Beautiful words and the perfect picture!
Awesome sweet lady~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

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just out of reach
5 posted 2004-09-05 10:57 PM


Nodding in agreement with my sister here
Hugs sweet Karilea.

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

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6 posted 2004-09-06 12:05 PM


WOW WOW WOW!

what a beautiful sight to behold....

I don’t want the world to see me
cause I don’t think that they’d understand
When everything’s made to be broken I just want you to know who I am

passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-09-06 12:44 PM


just gorgeous
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8 posted 2004-09-06 01:02 AM


this has me smiling
for a few reasons.

wonderful work!


snow

"Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless."
--Mother Teresa

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9 posted 2004-09-06 01:40 AM


Oh!  Good one, Sunshine!   .....jo
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10 posted 2004-09-06 01:55 AM


Making math fun. The picture + the poem = perfect.
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11 posted 2004-09-06 10:14 AM


This.....what can I say about perfection? Only "Yes...." and I guess not much more needs to be said.

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with you
12 posted 2004-09-06 12:22 PM


I am soooo feelin this
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13 posted 2004-09-06 12:30 PM


Aha!  SUPERB!!

Looks like a "greeting-card" future for you with dough rolling in empowered by the yeast of your words' feast.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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