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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-09-03 12:28 PM

Down Pouring

the rain rolls
and the only thunder
is between us
I wish I could
turn the page
to where misery
was something
you couldn’t find
but how can I grant
you something
I do not even have
myself

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2004-09-03 12:56 PM

ha! well said Helen . . .
seems as if we both have the
same thoughts this morning . . .
*hug*

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-09-03 01:03 PM

it's never simple, never

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-09-03 01:09 PM

Well said Helen...very well said!
Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes. ~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-09-04 03:56 PM

WOW -- storms everywhere! Good write, Helen.

...jo

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2004-09-04 04:59 PM

So much said
in so few words.
Excellent write, Helen!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2004-09-04 06:25 PM

"the rain rolls
and the only thunder
is between us"

loved this part

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2004-09-06 10:23 AM

the rain rolls
and the only thunder
is between us

Ow, this hurts all the way to the middle....a feeling I know only too well.

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______________Ratleader______________

MyHeartofShadows
Member

since 2004-09-04

Posts 88
Hyattsville, MD

8 posted 2004-09-06 11:29 AM

Short and emotionally packed. Wish you not a page, but a book of pages
to where misery
was something
you couldn’t find

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

9 posted 2004-09-06 12:01 PM

powerfully said, achingly powerful...leaving me speechless, for the most part

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2004-09-06 01:30 PM

Turning the page can be the hardest thing to do.

You say so much in so few words, and tug at my heart every time.

Nicely, Helen~

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

11 posted 2004-09-06 05:29 PM

Perfectly said in so few words. I can relate to this.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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