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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-09-02 10:30 PM



"Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless."
--Mother Teresa

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skyshine
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1 posted 2004-09-02 10:40 PM


Your imagery is beautiful, Snow!

~sky

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Do your best, just keep on laughing
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Susan
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2 posted 2004-09-03 12:00 PM


Enjoyed - what a fantastic graphic to compliment your words, creates quite the combination.

  Susan

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3 posted 2004-09-03 03:10 AM


you are so good at these!
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In Your Poetic Mind
4 posted 2004-09-03 02:59 PM


amazing....

I don’t want the world to see me
cause I don’t think that they’d understand
When everything’s made to be broken I just want you to know who I am

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5 posted 2004-09-05 09:39 AM


The picture is beautiful, the poem is great.

:-)

Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
6 posted 2004-09-05 06:21 PM


:-D thank you all very much !!!


snow

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7 posted 2004-09-06 02:03 AM


Hi, Snow!  Well, just plain WOW for starters.  The hooked fish and the dead fish...know the secret of the poppies....WOW.  Brilliant colors mirrored into a fog (outstanding) and profound words.   ....jo
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where the wild flowers grow
8 posted 2004-09-06 02:05 AM


absolutely lovely
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By the Seaside
9 posted 2004-09-06 12:56 PM


Impressive poetry, as always Snow~
You have a wonderful talent when it comes to the written word.

Just beautiful!

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10 posted 2004-09-07 12:16 PM


Hi Snow. LOVE THIS! Been such a long time since I got to read you. Been spending way to much time fishing lately. LOL! Anyway I had to comment on this even though I have only been home for a few hours. Great poem sweetie.

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