Cheerfully The Glade Made Mist

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Open Poetry #33

Cheerfully The Glade Made Mist

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-09-01 10:53 PM

Her thoughts set softly a palm
Upon the his beating heart
As fibrillations smoothed
And finally…opened the door
Their eyes filled with each other

Words melted into soft rain
Whispering in an autumn breeze
The unsure simmer of summer cooled
And finally…opened the heart

To weep the illusions away
In violet smoke the glade made mist
In afterglow that seemed timeless
Fawning to a melody serene
Their hearts filled with each other

And finally…opened their eyes

Copyright Kkh 9/1/04

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-09-02 01:32 AM

Mmmmm, lovely.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2004-09-06 12:44 PM

Words melted into soft rain
Whispering in an autumn breeze
The unsure simmer of summer cooled
And finally…opened the heart

So pretty, Kathleen~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-09-06 12:49 PM

Beautifully penned Kathleen.
Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes. ~

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2004-09-06 12:50 PM

Marvelous!

(oops an extra word in line two)

I absolutely love the alliteration in this line:

The unsure simmer of summer cooled

and the title? EXQUISITE!!!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2004-09-06 01:31 PM

I have to agree with Virginia, your word play
is excellent...such a light but passionate
poem.

ShiningWindHaze
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 138
California, United States

6 posted 2004-09-06 05:45 PM

Enough to wish it were an experience that I could hold onto. Complicatedly beautiful in a way that's not so simple.

- Haze

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