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E S West
Member

since 2004-08-31

Posts 116
California

0 posted 2004-09-01 03:57 PM

I ventured out as the rainstorm did pause.
Inside too long, I went to see what was.
Between dark clouds the moon cast down it's rays.
Upon a mountain masked in midnight haze,
As if she were claiming all she lit, her's.
Enticing to awe, as emotion stirs.
The glowing spire exhaulted in it's place,
So love will take between the hands a face.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2004-09-01 04:31 PM

Whoa! I am keepin' this one in my library. Awesome. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-09-01 10:01 PM

You know? I think I have a photo that would suit this poem...for I've been taking moon photos recently...

in fact, I believe you just inspired me...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2004-09-01 10:08 PM

UH-OH, someone inspired Sunshine....that means trouble....just kidding.  this is a
very well written poem.  You put a lot of
thought into the lines as well as ensuring
your metric count was right on.  Well done.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-09-01 10:30 PM

"The glowing spire exhaulted in it's place,
So love will take between the hands a face."

Love this...your use of imagery is wonderful.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes. ~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-09-02 04:10 AM

wow!

Welcome to Passions

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2004-09-02 09:13 PM

A very beautiful write...

hmmm seems vaguely familiar

M

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2004-09-02 10:25 PM

"Between dark clouds the moon cast down it's rays.
Upon a mountain masked in midnight haze,
As if she were claiming all she lit, her's.
Enticing to awe, as emotion stirs."

your words paint a pretty picture

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