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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Dead Quiet Even my heart beat is absent the silence a pleasure, the throbbing feel having lost its appeal and the body listening for any restirring that might bring on its return. Silence is music to my ears on a day when the body wants to dance out of its skin and move to a higher level of knowing, where the answers are without question. My reflection folds upon itself farewell thoughts to yesterday while cross stitching tomorrow's dreams, these thoughts so naked they are almost transparent needing a voice over to make them heard. My fever reigns, though lower than normal and I nest within myself searching for that comfort hold, that inherent feeling that is a principle to my being. I am disobedient to my wants as I hold back my surrender on days like this. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
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OMG this was brilliant, there were so many plays on words, holding attention all the way through, not one line to pick from as they were all speaking volumns...wonderfully penned. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Lee, I guess having an almost migraine was worth it then...  glad you enjoyedM Dixie, when DO you sleep? ( just curious *s) hugs M |
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