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Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-09-01 01:37 AM


I'm...tearing away,
I seem to have gone astray.
I'm...tearing away.
It's been so long,
But now I sing a new song.
I'm...tearing away,
I seem to have gone astray.
I'm...tearing away.
Slipping into a realm uknown,
The path clearly shown.
I'm...tearing away,
I seem to have gone astray.
I'm...tearing away.
From this place so divine,
I think it's time I redefine.
I'm...tearing away,
I seem to have gone astray.
I'm...tearing away.
Tearing away from here,
To the one I hold dear.
I'm...tearing away,
I seem to have gone astray.
I'm...tearing away.
I will return someday,
And write of cheerfulness I may.
I'm...tearing away,
I seem to have gone astray.
I'm...tearing away.

One cannot see what lies within if one does not see the obvious

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2004-09-01 03:50 AM


you and me both
Copperbell
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2 posted 2004-09-01 09:22 AM


I hope its a good thing for you -
Paula Finn
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missouri
3 posted 2004-09-01 01:12 PM


well I am here if ya need an anchor kiddo
Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion
4 posted 2004-09-01 02:17 PM


mom i think ya took it backwards :P and thanks everyone

One cannot see what lies within if one does not see the obvious

Copperbell
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5 posted 2004-09-01 04:33 PM


just reading again

And write of cheerfulness I may.
and
But now I sing a new song

awesome

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