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IndigoEve
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Etched in the illusion of time

0 posted 2004-08-31 09:03 AM


With his eyes slanted,
he asked me what the words
felt like, in my blood.
I could not answer him,
for fear of losing little bits
[broken pencil lead]
to impedimenta.
He watched me dying,
the years too unkind,
would not touch the pillow
and remember. He said,
tomorrow, you'll breathe.
I believed him,
while snaking my fingers
around a half chewed eraser,
pink as ghosts of dissolution.  
When it passed into yesterday,
he knew,
[better than our scornful God]
how to fail me again.
But this time, I waited
for compassion, mercy.
And it came.
He brushed death from me
with his lips -
the perfect artist's cliché.
Vandalized, he held my body,
and bargained my life with black rain.
I tripped,
and played purgatory like a cello.
Too tight for heaven,
too heavy and splintering for hell.
He smiled, dark yet knowingly
and I let Lucifer
take me by the hand,
as we danced to his liking.

If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2004-08-31 09:22 AM


Gads ...
this lingers.

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