Open Poetry #33 |
This Night |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
On a night such as this... We could write our silence on lips that part wordless to the night. While the wind reads our secrets as a kiss. Not a single word needs to be spoken... On a night such as this. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Eric, you are very good at writing short and sensual romance. Yes, you are! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A wonderful feel to this write Eric. Captivating. TD |
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Margot Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154 |
Wonderful Margot Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
enjoyed the read and suggestiveness here |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Excelent |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a night! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
this is lovely, I know that silence well Eric |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I miss those nights... beautiful and soft Erric M |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
soft and wonderful miscellanea |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A truly magical night, dear Eric! Your light shines bright... I love you. Margherita |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
marvelous and priceless...lovely read |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Just an added comment. This is every night...my night,your night,our night. We are vibrations of love. The is a force that matches this vibration and tremors in reply. The ancient Tantric sutras urge us to know this tremor, to be this tremor. The is no path to love...love is the path to all things. To be this tremor...we can offer ourselves to the night...knowing that the night itself responds in kind. And this is all we need. Love, Eric |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Both your poem and your comment are beautiful reads. *S* Excellent! *S* |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
good grief...you must keep her securely wrapped around your little finger with poetry like this.... *sigh* love it... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
truly all one needs |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
sigh - what beauty in your thoughts. susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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