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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-08-30 07:47 PM



On a night such as
this...

We could write our silence on
lips that part wordless to
the night.

While the wind reads our
secrets as a kiss.

Not a single word needs to
be spoken...

On a night such as
this.

© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2004-08-30 08:15 PM


Eric,  you are very good at writing short
and sensual romance.  Yes,  you are!

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2004-08-30 11:13 PM


A wonderful feel to this write Eric.
Captivating.
TD

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3 posted 2004-08-31 12:05 PM


Wonderful

Margot

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

ecrivan
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4 posted 2004-08-31 01:03 AM


enjoyed the read and suggestiveness here


Kristabell
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5 posted 2004-08-31 01:15 AM


Excelent
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6 posted 2004-08-31 01:45 AM


what a night!
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7 posted 2004-08-31 11:39 AM


this is lovely,
I know that silence well Eric

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8 posted 2004-08-31 11:49 AM


I miss those nights...

beautiful and soft Erric

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9 posted 2004-08-31 12:20 PM


soft and wonderful
                miscellanea

Margherita
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10 posted 2004-08-31 01:31 PM


A truly magical night, dear Eric!

Your light shines bright...

I love you.
Margherita

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11 posted 2004-08-31 01:39 PM


marvelous and priceless...lovely read
Ericc
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12 posted 2004-08-31 03:02 PM


Just an added comment.
This is every night...my night,your night,our night.

We are vibrations of love.
The is a force that matches this vibration and tremors in reply.

The ancient Tantric sutras urge us to know this tremor, to be this tremor.

The is no path to love...love is the path to all things.

To be this tremor...we can offer ourselves to the night...knowing that the night itself responds in kind.

And this is all we need.


Love,
Eric

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13 posted 2004-09-01 02:10 PM


Both your poem and your comment are beautiful reads. *S* Excellent! *S*
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14 posted 2004-09-01 05:25 PM


good grief...you must keep her securely wrapped around your little finger with poetry like this....
*sigh*

love it...

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15 posted 2004-09-01 05:50 PM


truly all one needs
Susan
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16 posted 2004-09-01 08:05 PM


sigh - what beauty in your thoughts.

  susan

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