Open Poetry #33 |
Groan |
Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
saturated skin heavy burden it pulls stretches forcing heavy hands to lift, higher, stronger dragging a heavy heart through the dirt the mud really because everything in its path soaked, drenched, filled with its annoying burden that I wish I could just shake like a dog and laugh at days bygone -maybe I'll just do that anyway- |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, if you won't I will, cuz I got a lot of um to...very well done!!!!! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Really liked this - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
thanks - grrr its been a frustrating day |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understanding this |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
OMG I love this! You are reading my mind Copper: Sideways Glance in the Mirror The lines wrought in plaster cracked and dry upon my walls have always been there. Sometimes not so noticable beneath twenty or so coats of paint, but today they seem to be screaming into my auditory canal causing my ears to bleed with envy . . . |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
dragging a heavy heart through the dirt the mud really because everything in its path soaked, drenched, filled with its annoying burden that I wish I could just shake like a dog and laugh at days bygone gawd, some days I wish I could just do this too..... you've written a part of each of us... we all have those days we WISH we could laugh away.... very well done! |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Passing Shadows - thanks for your comment, thanks for so often reading my words littlewing - thanks, thanks for sharing your poem Gentle Spirit - thank you for your comment,its encouraging to remember you;re not the only one. |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
hey good to see ya again...once again very well written One cannot see what lies within if one does not see the obvious |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Thank you Snow |
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