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Apology |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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You Drew a line and dared me to cross over I Drew a line and dared you to fall in love with me We Met in the middle Climbing into cupboards eating false alarms Tears ran down the cheeks of summer’s womanhood Hitting the breaks hard, like a change of life cramp We, heard the wings of hummingbirds Ate tubs of key lime pie… On the canvas of pretty boned lopes and prances Showing our best true selves…playfully naked We were hot-shots in California Life Styles Looking for new graffiti of our own With brilliant ruby hues according to family legends Stoking the belly of full moons Listening to the trees and their fraternity With breezes which cursed me…you…us I’m so sorry there is no pain, like the guilt of hurting someone, dissappointing them... are you sorry you crossed over? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ Such a beautiful and color rich apology! "I’m so sorry there is no pain, like the guilt of hurting someone, dissappointing them..." understanding hugs! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
You Drew a line and dared me to cross over I Drew a line and dared you to fall in love with me We Met in the middle Love these lines. The whole write was a treat. You've quite the way with words.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wonderful write! Eric |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Most certainly a fine write. I could feel and see it all within the unfolding of the moments as they passed my eyes. Well done Lee... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Wow, Lee! I really loved the way you wrote this. An abundance of images appeared as I read your words. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i like how you laid it all on the line with blatant honesty and questioning throughtout amid the beautiful images |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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