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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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fog lady in boots low cut gown again with the see thru showing out of focus temptation no adjustments except in the dreams and frustration when split seconds don't last long enough to satisfy but long enough to birth addiction ____________ Dark |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Fog has its own special charm..especially when YOU write her!  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, do I remember foggy mornings... love it! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark, Are you saying the fog does it? LOL Enjoyed |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Only in a New York State of Mind... Smiles and hugs exceptionally great write, as always... Thank you for sharing |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I love the fog - looking forward to it come fall, when it settles over the landscape in its misty drape and the world transcends into otherworldliness. Enjoyed this --  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkStranger~ This is as wonderful a penning as I've seen~ The doormat title led me in and I was held suspended in your thoughts~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
don't last long enough to satisfy but long enough to birth addiction ahhhh. those addictions will getcha every time won't they. Good morning Dark. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
this reminded me of having a liking towards something quite out of reach, almost within your grasp, as well as the desire to be one with the night, the fog . . . the unknown . . . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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