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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2004-08-29 11:42 PM



Picture by Josephine Wall

* * *

I felt a weight had been lifted
As my words were unfurled
I opened my heart to strangers
And shared my thoughts with the world

I received the warmest welcome
Friendly faces were abound
A place of warmth and comfort
My rightful place had been found

I was in awe at all the talent
And I lost all track of time
As I immersed myself in poetry
And my great love of rhyme

I read words of love and romance
And those of sadness and grief
So many words tugged at my heartstrings
Feelings so real, beyond belief

We have so much in common
Through your words, so much I see
As we expose our deepest feelings
And share our love of poetry

* * *

Dedicated to my fellow poets
with whom I share a special bond.

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077
Houston
1 posted 2004-08-30 12:40 PM


Lovely write! I love to read the heartfelt emotions that flow from my fellow Passioners....Passionates...Passiononians.... um.... POETS.. thats it.. hehe

Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all.


Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-08-30 03:01 PM


Sue - this is gorgeous, loving, kind.  I send it to the top so that it is not missed.

Hugs to you --   Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-08-30 03:17 PM


sue, this was marvelous...before I started writing had a difficult time articulating, now you cannot shut me up...suppose that's why my poems are sometimes even long winded...who cares right...long as we express...and share...what a lovely song you've written here, thank you
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

4 posted 2004-08-30 07:33 PM


Beautiful!

Eric

Magnus
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since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
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5 posted 2004-08-30 07:45 PM


And SueT,  this is what it is all about.
You have expressed it very well.
Always stay,  you are as much a part of this
family as any other...

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
6 posted 2004-08-30 10:13 PM


Sue, this is beautiful. Thank you! I really enjoy reading your poetry.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2004-08-31 12:42 PM


Enjoyed...James
Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29
Posts 678
Portland, OR
8 posted 2004-08-31 01:02 AM


Thank you for the wonderful dedication! You write very well. You portrayed your feelings grandly. Nice job.
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
9 posted 2004-08-31 02:02 AM


thank you Sue...you are a special lady
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