Open Poetry #33 |
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We Expose Our Deepest Feelings |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
![]() Picture by Josephine Wall * * * I felt a weight had been lifted As my words were unfurled I opened my heart to strangers And shared my thoughts with the world I received the warmest welcome Friendly faces were abound A place of warmth and comfort My rightful place had been found I was in awe at all the talent And I lost all track of time As I immersed myself in poetry And my great love of rhyme I read words of love and romance And those of sadness and grief So many words tugged at my heartstrings Feelings so real, beyond belief We have so much in common Through your words, so much I see As we expose our deepest feelings And share our love of poetry * * * Dedicated to my fellow poets with whom I share a special bond. I am in motion |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Lovely write! I love to read the heartfelt emotions that flow from my fellow Passioners....Passionates...Passiononians.... um.... POETS.. thats it.. hehe Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Sue - this is gorgeous, loving, kind. I send it to the top so that it is not missed. Hugs to you -- ![]() Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sue, this was marvelous...before I started writing had a difficult time articulating, now you cannot shut me up...suppose that's why my poems are sometimes even long winded...who cares right...long as we express...and share...what a lovely song you've written here, thank you |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And SueT, this is what it is all about. You have expressed it very well. Always stay, you are as much a part of this family as any other... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sue, this is beautiful. Thank you! I really enjoy reading your poetry. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Thank you for the wonderful dedication! You write very well. You portrayed your feelings grandly. Nice job. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you Sue...you are a special lady |
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