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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-08-28 09:10 AM



Rise

you sink like silk
to the folds of me
a decent of collapse
irresistibly falls to drown
yet, in this buried place
surrender drips in floating

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart



© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-08-28 10:00 AM


1slick_lady,
This is pure slick, enjoyed.

msflame
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2 posted 2004-08-28 08:39 PM


I thought this was beautiful. Thanks.
WindSong
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3 posted 2004-08-28 10:37 PM


it was lovely. thanks for sharing.

"They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by."

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-08-29 03:01 AM


whew!
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5 posted 2004-08-30 02:36 PM


Now, that was pretty slick lady
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6 posted 2004-08-30 07:38 PM


Beautiful.

Eric

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