Open Poetry #33 |
Rise |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Rise you sink like silk to the folds of me a decent of collapse irresistibly falls to drown yet, in this buried place surrender drips in floating just some words cut out |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady, This is pure slick, enjoyed. |
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msflame Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 188 |
I thought this was beautiful. Thanks. |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
it was lovely. thanks for sharing. "They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now, that was pretty slick lady |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful. Eric |
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