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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Time whirls away thoughts Filling out quilting frames Night dances with bottle in hand You go absorbing the corn One faint morning dry leaves fell Where cool breezes rattle aloft Light falls brittle and blue One chair fills a table for two Steps hover within arm’s length Bleeding I call 911 Finding a dollar in my pocket Red eyes turn to music modest For of the grouping sounds In forms the air rings out Music said life tangles and drifts But shapes soon turn swift No matter what one makes of time It is always possible to find That jade green path However small, however practice In the great wake of life Which never lets go There waits the facelift of rainbows |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
facelift of rainbows could be a poem by itself as much of your art lines could be enjoyed this view ms [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-27-2004 11:05 AM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the facelift of rainbows... i picked that one out too how glorious the message within this |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
There waits the facelift of rainbows love these thoughts Lee, guess we are seeming to agree on your words this morning~~ hugs M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ A nice bright write, good morning sweet. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"One faint morning dry leaves fell Where cool breezes rattle aloft Light falls brittle and blue One chair fills a table for two" that stanza hurt...aching hurt... but the rainbows...yes, waiting for something new and uplifting... really enjoyed this LeeJ  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
No matter what one makes of time It is always possible to find That jade green path However small, however practice In the great wake of life Which never lets go There waits the facelift of rainbows Lee, you always leave us with such uplifting and inspirational messages to get us through our busy and trying days of life... thank you for that... and for being you. HUGS |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
many thanks to you all for reading and commenting... Inkgoddess inspired these words, this morning after reading her poem, well, simply, the pain of a breakup with someone I dearly cared for, adding insult to injury, he didn't pick me...forcing a smile...well, simply trying to convey the pain of that rejection, but also staying focused on each new day, embracing me..with knowledge and perhaps wisdom..preparing for something special. You guys are great...very professional, fun, funny, and supportive. Thank you all for taking the time to read and comment...you are greatly appreciated. Luv Me |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this style really looks good on you |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful message here, my friend. Thank you!  |
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