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Susan
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walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-07-08 09:14 PM



starry, starry night
reflected in your eyes
pools of sweet magic
liquid mystery
engulfing me
within

a smile shinning bright
kindled in radiant glow
rays of enchantment
spreading intimately
encircling me
within

a touch of pure delight
brushed soft and subtle
tenderness a promise
sensual seduction
tracing me
without

turning out the light
enveloped in the physical
transcending the spiritual
reaching phenomenal
splintering me
without


s.a.s

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

© Copyright 2004 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-07-08 09:27 PM


Enchanting dear Susan...
I hope you are having a wonderful birthday!!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Susan
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walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-07-08 09:34 PM


Thank you, yes, lovely -- day in the park by the lake with family, breezy but sunny, then a visit to the penny candy store.  Can't get much sweeter than that.

Hugs -- Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
3 posted 2004-07-09 12:06 PM


Happy Birthday Susan!

Loved the feel of this gentle write...you speak the certainty of the splintering.
Loved this.
TD

Susan
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walking the surreal
4 posted 2004-07-09 12:25 PM


Thank you TD, both for the B-day wishes and for your kind words.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Krawdad
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5 posted 2004-07-09 01:02 AM


Intresting form.
I like it.

and happy belated b-day!

Susan
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walking the surreal
6 posted 2004-07-09 01:17 AM


Thank you kindly Mr. Krawdad.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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7 posted 2004-07-09 01:32 AM


Grogeous and passionate......mmmmmmm!  I see I just missed your birthday.....uuh ooo....I guess I'll with you HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY!   .....jo
HopeS
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8 posted 2004-07-09 02:52 AM


Such beautiful words flow from this enchanting glow .....happy belated Birthday wishes

Hope

passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2004-07-09 03:47 AM


fantastic write!

and happy birthday

Susan
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walking the surreal
10 posted 2004-07-09 11:15 AM


jo, hope and p.s. -- thanks for the belated happies, I'll enjoy them today   And thanks for your kind words of encouragement, I do so appreciate them.

  susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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