Open Poetry #33 |
Mere Distance |
James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Distance Mere dimension Useful for walls and fields, Safety from snakes and high voltage, The true Idiot's Tale, empty and bland. Love doesn't bother to span it. Love ignores such simple Dimensions, mere Distance |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Interesting thoughts, but cannot love span distance? Oh do you mean love knows no distance and thus it matters not? Love the safety from snakes and high voltage -- distance is very very good. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mere Perfection. Go ahead, James... write about mere perfection... you can even play on the word sounds... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jamie "Love doesn't bother to span it." Perhaps because love doesn't need to span it? I'm confused by that one line, for it seems to me that love does just that. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Love doesn't bother to span it. This does seem to be the focus... both for the eye and the mind... Perhaps love doesn't bother because if there's really love, there is no distance... none that matters anyway. *S* Wonderful mirror images of your first and last lines... much to ponder here! *S* |
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