Bringing in the sheaves II: Notes to the reaper

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Bringing in the sheaves II: Notes to the reaper

jellybeans
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0 posted 2004-08-25 11:20 AM

Notes to the reaper:

-planted seed did not appear notable,
covering promised necessities
for survival;

-leafage growth pattern is plentiful
but unruly, no clear viewpoint left;

-thrives in sadness, depends on
the lack of repentance;
the taste of the fruit is loathsome;

-inward headway is blocked,
roots protected by entanglements;

-the foliage fights back,
without help, eradication is not viable;

-movement is at a standstill, regrets snake
around ankles, with each outward step;

-hold off on the threshing, the cutter
precipitately began, fruitfully attaining limbo
in those remaining;

-hold off on the threshing, there is a lesson
to be learned from immorality’s seeding;

-hold off on the threshing please;
my Lord is still teaching.

Bringing in the sheaves I

[This message has been edited by jellybeans (08-25-2004 12:13 PM).]

Cpat Hair

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1 posted 2004-08-25 11:23 AM

hun... you always amaze me

Sunshine

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2 posted 2004-08-25 11:29 AM

-movement is at a standstill, regrets snake
around ankles, with each outward step;

~*~

Once again, two steps ahead...

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2004-08-25 11:35 AM

YES! I am never, ever disapointed when I read your words...
yer so good!

I enjoyed this hon.

Marge Tindal

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4 posted 2004-08-25 11:40 AM

SweetPoetess~
Through tears I read you ... and read you ... and read you~
You bless this house of pages blue~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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msflame
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5 posted 2004-08-25 12:12 PM

This is beautiful and inspirational. I'm very blessed by this, thank you.

jellybeans
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6 posted 2004-08-25 12:14 PM

thank you all so much, I chronicle my journey, my lessons learned, that it blesses you, blesses me

passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-08-25 01:02 PM

awesome!

Martie

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8 posted 2004-08-25 02:43 PM

jellybeans

You make such lovely poetry!

suthern

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9 posted 2004-08-27 03:43 PM

-movement is at a standstill, regrets snake
around ankles, with each outward step;

You continually amaze me with your talent, lady... and humble me with your faith. This is excellent work!!

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