Open Poetry #33 |
Thoughts this day |
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
My heart sings not in voice of tune But in a place I’ll meet too soon It sings not in the cord of peace But loudly longing for release But only echoes do return As what I long is sent to burn No one seems to hear my plea As heart does sing, but just to me There’s loneliness that can consume But I try not to give it room Happiness is state of mind But sometimes that state’s hard to find Life’s a teacher and a swine A battle fought or love divine An interim for what’s still to be The testing ground for you and me So I try to believe in life That all that’s good out ways the strife And weather we believe or not We should feel blessed for what we’ve got [This message has been edited by Rick (08-25-2004 07:21 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a good message Rick...and a very well done poem~~ M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
heartfelt rhyme speaking of the twilight years and the sometimes grey smother of clouds...and yet, in those clouds there is something, something deranged and glorious, which captures the soul wordless, pure threading wool comforters. Love to you my friend. There are many who hear...I promise. Hugs |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Rick, I always enjoy your thoughts, thank you so much for sharing with us. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a good message here...one we should all read every day |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Cursed we are . . . yet blessed -glider- |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Rick "So I try to believe in life That all that’s good out ways the strife And weather we believe or not We should feel blessed for what we’ve got" Me too!! Thanks for this! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
I am surely blessed to have so many friends here to listen and reply, I hear your voices and save your words, and forever enjoy your company. Wonderful to see you all, big hugs and thankyou's. Sincerely Rick |
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