Open Poetry #33 |
haiku? |
Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Lines of birds perching as power pole ellipses ad infinitum |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very nice! this is one of my favorite poetic forms. Yes, ad infinitum. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Excellent Haiku, you! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Excellent, a picture of continuation, life going on and on in the great ellipse... enjoyed ---------ice ><> Come read to me some poem, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Life is amazing, as you have portrayed here...wonderul write |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah.. yes I agree with the sunshine one.. excellent... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I enjoyed this one. There's always so much more to a haiku than 17 syllables should be able to tell. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Krawdad Just so, well done! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Haiku! Bless you Much enjoyed. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
nice |
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