Open Poetry #33 |
Yonder Man |
Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
Done got me a wife, she don’t care for me. Can’t blame her too much it’s just how she feels. So Go on yonder boy, don’t ya follow me. Don’t need no shadow stepping on my heels. I don’t need no one walkin down that path. Don’t know where its goes, it ain’t goin back. No I ain’t scared of her, she won’t fade away. I left her right there alone in that shack. Jesus, mercy me, sinned a time or two, as tha preacher man tells me, you can see. Oh I’ll keep on moven, till you strike me down, ‘cause old lady’s ghost; she don’t frighten me. I have seen tha sun. I have seen tha rain I have seen some things I just can’t explain. I”ll Tell you here and now she’s a mean ol’hag. Even when she's dead, still has to complain. [This message has been edited by Effigy (08-25-2004 05:07 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
like this... where it goes and how it puts you inside the thoughts.. nicely done |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
creative , like the sound , the end made me lol ... |
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