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choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

0 posted 2004-08-24 01:37 PM

Seemingly lost
in the emptiness of mist,
the dawn sun
shines full in each droplet
clinging to rain-drenched petals.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-08-24 01:38 PM

Paul, this is so beautiful, both words and pic. What lovely colors you paint our world with!

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

2 posted 2004-08-24 01:40 PM

you've been hiding in the garden's reflection. How so, i wish to go.....

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2004-08-24 01:46 PM

KEEPER!

softest sun does glow
in misty morning one knows
it is still around

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2004-08-24 04:26 PM

I hesitate to answer your poems. I think you must get tired of someone who can never say anything but, 'beautiful!' And that's all I ever come up with to say.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-08-24 06:08 PM

lovely - sigh.

susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2004-08-24 07:34 PM

Enjoyed...James

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2004-08-24 08:28 PM

As one who loves to look through the lens
with a thought to the penning...
I am deeply appreciative of both your photo
and the writing.

And I would love to capture this picture
for my desktop.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-08-26 04:24 AM

how'd I miss this?

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

9 posted 2004-08-26 10:16 AM

Beautiful writing and photo. This is a pleasure to read, choshi.
miscellanea

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

10 posted 2004-08-26 10:34 AM

"you've been hiding in the garden's reflection. How so, i wish to go....."

Thank you Dear Dawn ....

The waxing half-moon,
though hidden by passing clouds,
returns to fullness-
beyond what is near or far
shimmering in pond ripples.

back

~P

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

11 posted 2004-08-26 10:39 AM

Thank you Kacy,

softest sun does glow
in misty morning one knows
it is still around

~~~~~<@>~~~~~

Filling the air,
the song of waking doves;
the sun's warming rays.

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