Sending Heartfelt Condolences

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Sending Heartfelt Condolences

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2004-08-22 01:14 PM

Sending Heartfelt Condolences

Expressing heartfelt sympathy
For the grief you're going though
During your time of sadness
My heart goes out to you

Heartbreak of losing a brother
I know you must be asking why
His parting will leave a void
He was too young to die

By cherishing those moments
Of all the times spent together
He's gone but not forgotten
Memories will last forever

Its never easy saying goodbye
After all you had been through
Sending heartfelt condolences
I will always be here for you

Hope©2004

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

1 posted 2004-08-22 02:18 PM

I hope he reads this, when time permits.
A warm compassionate poetic write, Hope.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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USA

2 posted 2004-08-22 02:37 PM

Hope, this is such a sweet, thoughtful poem. Though I do not know who you wrote this for, I hope it brings him some peace.

....jo

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

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British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2004-08-22 02:57 PM

Your heart is showing again Hope. They will love this poem.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-08-22 05:52 PM

A true heartbeat of condolence.

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

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walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-08-22 06:05 PM

Hope - what a warm, compassionate gift. Lovely.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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displaced

6 posted 2004-08-24 12:49 PM

you have a heart of gold

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

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Perth Western Australia

7 posted 2004-08-24 12:55 PM

Thank you Midnitesun , yes I did send the poem , in fact he lives in Oregon

Hope

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

8 posted 2004-08-24 12:57 PM

Thank you iliana , he as been a very close friend for 8 years although we have never met , yes hopefully the poem will help give him a little comfort

Hope

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

9 posted 2004-08-24 12:59 PM

thank you Sharon , well it seems fitting because it was him that opened my heart in the first place some 8 years ago

Hope

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