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Her Mystic Glow
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Her Mystic Glow |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Her Mystic Glow So warm the breast of womanhood That through the ages has withstood The pilferage of man’s desire Lit by her own intrinsic fire Transparent is her faceless pose But lustful eyes do not expose What truly lies behind the face Where tresses veil its honored place How falsely flesh can hide the whole How duly scars protect the soul Like rocks embedded deep within The supple layers of the skin She gave the fruits of passion’s bliss And hid her pain within a kiss Her sheltered eye releasing tears That wet the fringes of her fears Her sorrow dwells where sorrow should Behind the breast of womanhood And he, the master of disgrace Has never truly seen her face For he is blind and doesn’t know Where lies a woman’s mystic glow And doesn’t truly understand The way a woman loves a man Elizabeth Santos |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
And you are wise, and your words as lovely as your spirit, Liz Santos. Beautiful. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Her sorrow dwells where sorrow should Behind the breast of womanhood And he, the master of disgrace Has never truly seen her face ~*~ Most men will never, ever so do... but the ones that may see her through, do not speak to any other, this, but instead bow, hold her, and gently, kiss. You ARE an inspiration! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Liz, just beautiful, I love the way you write, makes me want to read on and on, I see the inner glow and it is wonderful. Be well dear friend and take care. Sincerely Rick |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
speachless *applause* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
an awesome piece  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz You see so clearly into the soul and your own face is "Lit by her own intrinsic fire" I miss you!  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
and standing ovation, Liz!  ....jo |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wow that was some dream? I happened to notice the time you people are up, and I miss half the day over here  Well I know one thing, I wish I was as wise as you are m'friend. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (08-22-2004 05:17 PM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Oh Liz, how you have so integraded words from the essense of a woman...this was extraordinarily beautiful. Periodically there are those special ones who touch your life so ever spiritually, and you, my friend are one of those special ones. God bless you and thank you for this elegant read. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Some do understand, not many, but a few...and they're seldom the ones who think they do. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
this is so beautiful i have no words to express, except i love it. |
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