Open Poetry #33 |
It Must Be There |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
It Must Be There perchance there are no words no language to describe it or definition to relate to it must be there where it is that silence falls my voice cries inside to be relieved just as leaves shiver in the wind and still it goes on, unheard just some words cut out from the diary of my heart [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (08-22-2004 12:07 AM).] |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
1slick_lady, This is a lovely write my friend, you are right, there must be a place, I believe if lies inside of us all, when the need, it might escape in or dreams or nightmares, for us then to be able to hold more in, you sound very much as I. Be well dear friend and take care. Enjoyed the read. Sincerely Rick |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hi Helen. Love this. Dang I am reading lots of great poetry this morning. This verse you have gifted me with is one of the best I've read thus far. The language useage speaks to my heart. It is refreshing and makes for a great read. Well done my friend...well done indeed. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I understand |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
....and there are two kinds of silence, one without sound and one that's made of empty noise. You've known both, I think -- and not nearly far enough in the past. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Then the diary of your heart is where it is, truth, and I bet lots of love for all. Enjoyed this read very much, thanks for sharing words cut out from your heart. JL |
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