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Is there nothing she can give you?
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Is there nothing she can give you? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Leisurely walk the curving road between the stars Carry a spirits words….what does she require? Do you know, the color of her eyes? Do you know her mountains…her valleys? Can you let her dream, do you know what gives her joy? What inspires her heart, have you been there for her? Do you look into her core like your own? Place your wisdom in her arms and care to know Are you humble, not thinking of yourself? Detach emotionally and listen to her voice Change the blaming into a better understanding Can you share with her your joys Sharing the truth of your sorrows and fears Which can offer growth, moving beauty beyond years Do you have more fear of being wrong? Everyone owns something you do not Upon realizing the other’s lead, both begin to flow In movement with the music, gentle cues of rationale Do you hear her pain or think only of your own Have you heard what she has to share? Do you see her without touching her heart Question is, do you hear what your listening for? |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
much enjoyed Victims....aren't we all? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*keeping this* |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
;should one be able to answer "Yes," it would surely be the essence of love. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This is one, Lee, that I will save for my son. Very much wisdom here.  ....jo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ To be able to ask these questions means you understand the answers or have experienced them. I hope you have experienced them! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you for this wonderful gift. Such eloquence is so very rare. TD |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
I wish, I wish -- that I had read this two days ago. I needed it then, and I would have to split myself into two poets, to say how much. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lee, now if he and she will listen and abide to this, their relationship would be wonderful. I'm keeping this to read over and over. Hugs, Ethel |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ Priceless wisdom clothed so elegantly~ Do you not just LOVE Jaime's reply ? I do~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Lee... You are such a wise woman. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
So much truth written so wonderfully. Thank you! Kelly  You can give without loving but you cannot love without giving |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is one of the most wise writes of love and relationships that I have ever had the pleasure of reading.....We all have experienced much of what you have given us. Question is, have we applied what we have learned? Answer is, yes to some, no to some...but still learning, even to this day. Thanx LeeJ, you have given me the food that I needed...Now I shall share it with a lady who shares my life with me. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Mesmerizing words. Such depth in this write. Wonderful. JL (Peach?) |
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